Welcome readers of my Nifty story In the Blink of an Eye! I will post updates here, answer questions and be available to discuss the story as it progresses. I've really worked hard to answer emails and will continue to do so, however this is a place where we can talk about the story together. Several people mentioned that they would like to chat with others about the various deeds and misdeeds of Alvin and Drago so I hope this satisfies that desire.
If you stop by, leave a comment! I'd love to know what you think of the story and the direction it's taking.
Hey everyone! I just posted Chapter 17 on Nifty. Usually chapters go live late in the afternoon the day after I post, so I'd say check in on Wednesday evening (I'm in the Pacific time zone, for reference).
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DeleteHi there! I like your story, but we're missing Chapter 16.
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Lenny
Hey, sorry about chapter 16. I mis-numbered and so there will be no chapter 16. HA. I'll pay better attention in the future.
ReplyDeleteHey, been reading the story since the beginning. I agree with previous comments, you know how to write a great story and keep the reader wanting the next chapter. Also, spelling, grammar and proof reading get you a 10 in my book, a rarity on Nifty. The sex is varied, fun and horny. You have found a fascinating character in Alvin. Looking forward to much more.
ReplyDeleteSo one of the more interesting things that came up in the comments was whether or not to feature Aldon, Alvin's older brother. I had requests for more Aldon and requests to get him out of town quick. What do you think?
ReplyDeleteAldon was a nice diversion. Featuring him would move the story in a whole new direction. He might come back for a visit, maybe even with his dom, giving a little taste of reality to mom and dad. It might also be fun to see Dago have a go at him! Honestly, I'm not really into the whole hardcore dom/submissive. A little goes a long way with me.
DeleteI tend to agree that Aldon is a fun side character. I don't intend to include him in the story again unless he makes a return visit at Christmas or Spring Break. I guess I was surprised at how many people asked for more of him. I had nearly as many people say that they weren't interested at all in Aldon returning. Polarizing character!
DeleteHi--I just posted chapter 18. It should be live tomorrow evening. Thanks for reading and feel free to comment.
ReplyDeleteHey, just checking in to see if I alienated everyone with the last chapter. I hope to have the next chapter posted in the next few days. I think of this as ultimately a love story that hits a few bumps along the way. With Alvin meeting his other family, a lot of new experiences occur, with him getting back to Drago. A lot of people mentioned that they want to see the two of them together and I want to ensure that there is a lot more to this story than Alvin whoring around. Let me know what you think!
ReplyDeleteHey man! Don't worry! The last chapter was super hot! I hope you get Drago and Alvin come to an agreement and fuck around together with other guys such as Landry,Malcolm,Aldon,Ron. You can perfectly justify this choice, given the situation with Alvin's head injuries and Drago's understanding of this temporary situation with the help of Doctors Winters. Of course at the end, Alvin and Drago should be committed to each other. But in the mean time, the context of your story gives you almost all possibilities open! Keep writing this amazing story :)
ReplyDeleteHi all--just posted Chapter 19. Should be live tomorrow (Friday 5/22) afternoon/evening.
ReplyDeleteAll the best, stay safe, Joe
Happy Memorial Weekend! Hope everyone is having a fantastic weekend and that you found a few minutes to read the latest chapter of In the Blink of an Eye. Let me know what you think of Alvin's latest antics--I mean Vin!
ReplyDeleteHey, chapter 20 just went live. It may be about an hour before it shows up on the site. Happy Reading
ReplyDeleteIf I knew Alvin irl he'd be so dead lol, but these chapters have been amazing. Excited to see more!
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